Mukom Akong T.
2015-04-07 22:59:32 UTC
I committed to reviewing this draft. I only have one suggestion for the
authors to improve legibility: itemising the specific set of criteria for
review in section 2.
I also attach the reviewed document.
P/S: This is my first review so I might not be aware of a proper procedure
to submit it, please point me to the right procedure if this isn't it.
Regards.
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Mukom Akong T.
http://about.me/perfexcellence | twitter: @perfexcellent
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âWhen you work, you are the FLUTE through whose lungs the whispering of the
hours turns to MUSIC" - Kahlil Gibran
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authors to improve legibility: itemising the specific set of criteria for
review in section 2.
I also attach the reviewed document.
P/S: This is my first review so I might not be aware of a proper procedure
to submit it, please point me to the right procedure if this isn't it.
Regards.
--
Mukom Akong T.
http://about.me/perfexcellence | twitter: @perfexcellent
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âWhen you work, you are the FLUTE through whose lungs the whispering of the
hours turns to MUSIC" - Kahlil Gibran
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--
Mukom Akong T.
http://about.me/perfexcellence | twitter: @perfexcellent
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âWhen you work, you are the FLUTE through whose lungs the whispering of the
hours turns to MUSIC" - Kahlil Gibran
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Mukom Akong T.
http://about.me/perfexcellence | twitter: @perfexcellent
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âWhen you work, you are the FLUTE through whose lungs the whispering of the
hours turns to MUSIC" - Kahlil Gibran
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